Fantastic Read
This story was really well thought out and very descriptive, which pulled you into the imaginary World of Dowler and the castle beyond. Mixing the fairytale of the Pied Piper was a clever touch. The story gives a satisfying and complete ending. The only thing that would have made it a tiny bit better would be to have more information on Oren's Origin story, but overall, it was a really nice story.
